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Juanita's Ashes

May 3rd 2008 07:05

My wonderfully vivacious Aunt Juanita!

Juanita is home;
again and forever,
her solid form crushed,
to granules incarcerated,
in awful polly foam.

Tentatively,
I picked her up,
heavy stolid solid,
then movement within,
the fake casket,
blazoned by,
plastic bright silver,
her name etched,
meticulously mechanically.

Her bone mass slipped,
inside one side,
with a flump;
heart jumped!

For this is she,
this is all,
have I of her,
for me.

My friend,
dearest confidante,
broad shouldered,
grand humoured,
long enduring eared,
to my tepid tempests,
of familial drear.

I have her,
now, with me;
my welling numb nest,
within dispelled,
once her home-spirit welled,
flooding away,
dank hearted dark discord,
leaving me,
a suddenly awakened,
shipwreck survivor,
gripping shore sand,
reassured and relieved,
after an interminable,
terrible sea.

Home,
quietly,
home hereafter,
home now,
warming,
heartening,
for me.

(ode for my dear friend Juanita, whose ashes I collected and returned to my home yesterday)

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Comment by tlcorbin

May 4th 2008 02:18

Coffee Quip

Salute, Soulful Savior, Sanctified Saint , Solicitous Soul: peace my friend Fog

Raven

Comment by Mountain Fog

May 4th 2008 02:33

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thanks Raven, and lovely alliterative phrase too.

fog

Comment by Ken 1

May 4th 2008 06:59

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I'm feeling it. Beautiful piece!

Ken

Comment by Mountain Fog

May 4th 2008 08:23

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thanks Ken,

much appreciated.

fog

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