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old man wicker chair

June 17th 2008 02:50

old man wicker chair,
bared frayed thread,
well travelled unravelled,
split canes in curves,
nails and bands bending,
hues bedimmed and bleeding.

its vigour vanquished,
by buttocks descent,
enduring eons throughout,
mottled, lined and cracking,
past pristine allure,
abated, now fated, for tip.

settling within its,
clutching arms akimbo,
give knowing embrace,
of friends of ages unseen,
cane creaking hugs rekindling,
momentary mementoes, mistily.

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Comment by Louie

June 17th 2008 08:37

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love this. did you do the Pic too because it really works to bring the image home to me. I especially love the ending.

cane creaking hugs rekindling,
momentary mementoes, mistily

AWESOME

Comment by KylieW

June 18th 2008 04:48

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Louie is right, the pic perfectly matches this prose. Loved it. Particularly:

past pristine allure,
abated, now fated, for tip

the downfalls of a consumeristic society sadly!

Comment by Mountain Fog

June 18th 2008 11:57

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Hi Louie,

YES!! It is my drawing...of sorts!!

I tried to find a photo of a dilapidated wicker chair but, incredibly, every one I found wanted money to reproduce it... anyhoo, it is better to draw it even though it is clumsy with a mouse..

Anyhoo, tanx for the compliments!!

cheers

fog

Comment by Mountain Fog

June 18th 2008 11:59

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Hi Kylie,

tanx for the compliment!!

Much appreciated!! And yes, it is my clumsy drawing of a chair, by mouse, which is a hopeless device for drawing with!!

cheers

fog

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