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THE CITY

August 18th 2007 12:39
What darkness lurks this island land?
Its soils enriched, by spilt blood,
the ochreman's spirit, left silent witness,
to the gaudy glare, of cities of despair.

Towering are these infernos of light,
erected through, paler mans’ fight,
to grasp the grail, transparent as greed,
filling an unholy pocket, soul empty in need.

Amongst it we stand too proudly tall,
in shadows of glass growths, with no seed,
embedded in tar, brightly war painted,
collateral collision, its deadly decoration.

Survivors of this killing course,
honour the dollar, while avoiding the hearse,

then when life, is on the wane,
we utter God's name, vain profane.

Wherever this shall lead us to,
judgement waits, sparing few,
the might of monsters, of today,
will be for nought, on judgement day!

_______________________
Copyright 1994
(#20: 17-4-94 at St.Andrews)
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Comment by Chic Critique

August 19th 2007 11:12
Lovely use of assonance and alliteration....and a really great poem. Nice .....very nice.....

Cheers
CC

Comment by Mountain Fog

August 19th 2007 11:22
Why thanks CC!!
And I am impressed that you perceived the poetic devices and their terms!
Not meaning to sound condescending, it is just that I rarely 'meet' anyone who does know!

Anyhoo...taa again!!

fog

Comment by Chic Critique

August 19th 2007 12:09
You're more than welcome, no condescension taken.



Cheers
CC

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